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Author Topic: [Chronicle] After The Fall  (Read 3904 times)

Ciarente

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[Chronicle] After The Fall
« on: 25 Mar 2013, 06:23 »
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Silver Night > I feel like we should keep Cia in reserve. A little bit for Cia's sanity, but mostly because her putting on her mod hat is like calling in Rommel to deal with a paintball game.

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Re: [Chronicle] After The Fall
« Reply #1 on: 25 Mar 2013, 07:56 »
[spoiler]But then who was body? D:[/spoiler]

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Ciarente

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Re: [Chronicle] After The Fall
« Reply #2 on: 25 Mar 2013, 07:58 »
Added a spoiler tag for you!
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Silver Night > I feel like we should keep Cia in reserve. A little bit for Cia's sanity, but mostly because her putting on her mod hat is like calling in Rommel to deal with a paintball game.

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Re: [Chronicle] After The Fall
« Reply #3 on: 25 Mar 2013, 08:15 »
Interesting chronicle. I like it.

Although I kind of share the confusion. Must re-read when I'm at home. :O
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Re: [Chronicle] After The Fall
« Reply #4 on: 25 Mar 2013, 08:19 »
I think, based on the chronicle language and while attempting to not give spoilers, the last sentence refers to his own people.
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Re: [Chronicle] After The Fall
« Reply #5 on: 25 Mar 2013, 08:26 »
Quote from: Grideris on 25 Mar 2013, 07:56
[spoiler]But then who was body? D:[/spoiler]

I think Art's certainly right about who they were. Why? Here's my take on the answer to that question:

[spoiler]I think the narrator was Dexter Morgan transposed to an internet spaceship game. In my reading of it, the repeated references to 'the garden' sounded like both metaphor and euphemism - I think his first reference to it was as something that 'needed absolute attention' and, in the end, lost out to raising his family (which required the same). ::shrug:: Will have to read it again and see if this impression sticks.[/spoiler]
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Morwen Lagann

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Re: [Chronicle] After The Fall
« Reply #6 on: 25 Mar 2013, 08:40 »
[spoiler]Yeah. I didn't see any mention of the guards carting away the vandals, which led me to figure that they were the bodies, myself.[/spoiler]
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3) The lack of suitable male partners can be summed up in most cases thusly: interested, worth the air they breathe, available; pick two.

Desiderya

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Re: [Chronicle] After The Fall
« Reply #7 on: 25 Mar 2013, 08:45 »
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I offered the guards all the herbs and vegetables they wanted, and they declined with polite amusement. They told me they would spread the word that I and my garden weren't to be touched, and if that either were harmed in any fashion, there'd be a scouring. I thanked them profusely. They left me after a while, carting off the miscreants and promising to keep an eye out for my dog.
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Re: [Chronicle] After The Fall
« Reply #8 on: 25 Mar 2013, 08:50 »
Quote from: Desiderya on 25 Mar 2013, 08:45
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I offered the guards all the herbs and vegetables they wanted, and they declined with polite amusement. They told me they would spread the word that I and my garden weren't to be touched, and if that either were harmed in any fashion, there'd be a scouring. I thanked them profusely. They left me after a while, carting off the miscreants and promising to keep an eye out for my dog.
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Okay, I'm clearly not as awake as I thought I was. Missed that. xD
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Morwen's Law:
1) The number of capsuleer women who are bisexual is greater than the number who are lesbian.
2) Most of the former group appear lesbian due to a lack of suitable male partners to go around.
3) The lack of suitable male partners can be summed up in most cases thusly: interested, worth the air they breathe, available; pick two.

Graelyn

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Re: [Chronicle] After The Fall
« Reply #9 on: 25 Mar 2013, 10:24 »
[spoiler]I think one, at least, was his wife.[/spoiler]
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Re: [Chronicle] After The Fall
« Reply #10 on: 25 Mar 2013, 11:28 »
I must really not be awake because I read it straight and didn't see any hidden meanings. Someone want to point out where they think some of these are?

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Re: [Chronicle] After The Fall
« Reply #11 on: 25 Mar 2013, 12:59 »
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Re: [Chronicle] After The Fall
« Reply #12 on: 25 Mar 2013, 13:17 »
I might be brain-farting but I'm really not seeing the 'hidden' things here?
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Re: [Chronicle] After The Fall
« Reply #13 on: 25 Mar 2013, 13:21 »
[spoiler]The vegetables would be the corpses of the gallente offenders. Not sure myself but it's a possibility. The mention of "bodies" at the end triggered a lot of alarms for me. Of course the bodies could just be the work of the Caldari guards too, burried amongst the vegetables...[/spoiler]
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Re: [Chronicle] After The Fall
« Reply #14 on: 25 Mar 2013, 13:42 »
I read it as the Gallentean version of Wild Earth.  :)
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