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Louella Dougans

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Re: The Bhaalgorn Under the Bed
« Reply #15 on: 05 Feb 2015, 15:15 »

The Evil Lollipop

Once there was a little girl called Qerray, who liked lollipops, and going to the park with her mummy. The park had a lollipop stand, run by a nice priest, who sold lots of tasty lollipops to the children that went to the park.

One day when Qerray went to the park, the lollipop stand wasn't there, and Qerray was sad. She asked her mummy if she could go to the shops instead, to buy a lollipop, but her mummy said no, because those lollipops were too expensive, and Qerray's mummy said she could have an ice-cream instead, later.

But Qerray wanted a lollipop, and stamped her foot. "I don't want ice-cream, I want a lollipop!", she said. Her mummy said to go and play on the swings, and behave, otherwise she wouldn't get a lollipop ever again. So Qerray went to play on the swings, while her mummy talked to the other mummies that took their children to the park.

At the swings, she met a strange-looking man, with a pointy nose and a moustache. The man said "Do you like lollipops?", and Qerray said "yes, but mummy said I can't have one", and the man said "I have a lollipop for you, but you can't tell your mummy", and gave Qerray a lollipop, which was red. Qerray said "thank you", and the man said "Enjoy your lollipop" and then left.

The next time Qerray and her mummy went to the park, the lollipop stand was still not there, but the strange-looking man was, and when Qerray's mummy wasn't looking, Qerray got another red lollipop from the strange-looking man.

After a few days, Qerray noticed that one of her teeth fell out. She showed the tooth to her mummy, and her mummy said she shouldn't have any more lollipops, in case more of her teeth fell out. Qerray was not happy about this.

Then when Qerray and her mummy went to the park, and Qerray saw the strange-looking man, and said to him that her tooth fell out and she couldn't have any more lollipops. The strange-looking man said that he had a brother who was a dentist, who could give her a new tooth, then she could have all the lollipops that she could want ! Qerray was excited by the thought of lots of lollipops, and said she wanted to meet the strange-looking man's brother, so when Qerray's mummy wasn't looking, she went with the strange-looking man to see his brother.

The strange-looking man's brother looked exactly the same, and said "hello, you needed a new tooth?" and Qerray said yes, and then she sat in the dentist chair, and the strange-looking dentist opened a box of new teeth, found one the right size, and put it into Qerray's mouth. "There you go", he said, and Qerray was happy. The strange-looking man gave her another lollipop, and then she went back to the park where her mummy was.

That night, when Qerray went to bed and was trying to sleep, she heard strange voices, that told her to do things. She was scared, and woke up and went to see her mummy. Her mummy asked what was wrong, and Qerray said that she was hearing strange voices. Qerray's mummy was worried about this, and said they had to go to the doctor right away.

The doctor looked at Qerray and asked her what was wrong, and Qerray said she was hearing strange voices. The doctor asked where the voices were coming from, and Qerray said they sounded like they were coming from inside her head. The doctor and Qerray's mummy looked very worried about this. Then the doctor said Qerray could have a lollipop, for being a good girl. But when Qerray opened her mouth to eat the lollipop, she heard the strange voices again, and this time Qerray's mummy and the doctor heard them too. They were coming from inside Qerray's mouth! From the tooth that the strange-looking dentist had put there !

Qerray's mummy asked "where did you get that tooth?" and Qerray said all about the strange-looking man and the strange-looking dentist, and the red lollipops. Qerray's mummy and the doctor looked very worried about this, and the doctor sent a message to the Inquisition.

The next day, some Inquisitors went with Qerray and her mummy to the park, and Qerray pointed out the strange-looking man, and the Inquisitors ran after the strange-looking man and arrested him and his brother. The strange-looking man and his brother admitted that they were in fact evil cultists, who gave children evil lollipops full of evil sugar, that caused the children's teeth to fall out, so they could replace the teeth with evil teeth that had radios in them, which they used to make the children do evil things.

Qerray's mummy said that this is why too many lollipops are bad, and why Qerray was naughty for wanting lollipops after her mummy had said no, and then Qerray said she was sorry, and would not accept lollipops from strange-looking men ever again.
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Re: The Bhaalgorn Under the Bed
« Reply #16 on: 05 Feb 2015, 16:25 »

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Re: The Bhaalgorn Under the Bed
« Reply #17 on: 06 Feb 2015, 11:47 »

These are awesome, Louella! :cube:
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Re: The Bhaalgorn Under the Bed
« Reply #18 on: 06 Feb 2015, 11:57 »

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Re: The Bhaalgorn Under the Bed
« Reply #19 on: 07 Feb 2015, 08:35 »

maybe that story would make children afraid of the dentist, more that it'd make them afraid of funny looking dudes.
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