3. The Empires
Just small things... like:
"The last emperor, Heideran VII, lived for about 300 years." The last emperor was Doriam II.. Heideran VII was before him... so I would just add out the "last": "The emperor, Heideran VII, lived for about 300 years."
"Great religious fervor sweeps through the True Amarr as they race to conquer the infidels, eventually taking the entire planet over, under the royal Amarr seal. " I dont know if the seal even extist tru that time.... I just would take it out: "Great religious fervor sweeps through the True Amarr as they race to conquer the infidels, eventually taking the entire planet over."
About:
Your Terran superweapon link....
I would link it more to the vid,
see here at 1:34, is the superweapon in action. This seminars actually horror wiki articles... I cant belive that something like this gets even a lead-in and the old Ally conflict portal doesnt.
About:
"The Khanid are a bit unique in that they are their own separate pseudo-kingdom, having seceded in 22762 AD after a botched imperial secession (looked briefly at in Part 3). Still, they are fairly well-ensconced in the Empire and show no desire to leave it completely."
Like I said before... the bloodline and Kingdom are two different things.... like I have try to show
here. Whan Im back, I will try to add some comments on the Khanid talk pages... and the Amarr emperor page... and on the forum because of the ne eveonline main page...
Being part of a minor faction can be hard sometimes... you have a lot of timeline changes.. and now... others
but this is another story.
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"That said, Amarr also tend to be friendly towards the Caldari (apparently in an “enemy of my enemy is my friend” type approach)."
The Amarr have also good realtions with them tru the Kingdom, because it is a mediator between the two cultures... and maybe add the
CAESA.
Maybe something like: That said, the Empire tend to be friendly towards the Caldari, even to the point the they started a stimulus agreement (CAESA) with the State. etc...
About Roleplaying.... actually their isnt so much Bloodline roleplay on the amarr side as it is on the Minmatar side.... so I would If I was you maybe not just change the Khanid part...
Most of the Roleplay is along the Royal houses.. in my early days... I have found in the Emprie a lot of Kador and Sarum roleplayer... actually way, way, way more roleplayers along the Houses...than Players along the Bloodlines... It has no direct meaning... it isnt like the Republic side... were your Bloodline is your tribe... etc.... (As True Amarr, Khanid, Ni-Kunni can you be a Empire, Kingdom, Mandate etc... Roleplayer)
Dont get me wrong I like the start... with that players can play along the religious-line or not.. etc.. I see it the same way.... But like I said... you will find more royal houses roleplayers or even Kingdom or Mandate roleplayers, than actuall Bloodline RPs.... but as Tip... and starting point of the article would I have let it in.
Maybe:
Roleplaying: Like you first part Free to Choose... Second Part: Bloodlines.... Third Part: Royal Houses Fourth Part: Subfactions: Ammatar Mandate, Khanid Kingdom (both are open for all bloodlines, and the Mandate even for the Minmatar ones).
Your blog is a nice read... I will try to get to the other faction too.... but Im not an expert on them.
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