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Author Topic: [Character] Aradina Varren  (Read 153 times)

Aradina

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[Character] Aradina Varren
« on: 13 Oct 2017, 03:49 »

Decided to finally make one of these. It's kinda bare, I plan to work on it some more at a later point in time.
Feedback appreciated. Both on this and the character in general.

BASIC
Name: Aradina Deikano Varren
D.O.B.: YC86/08/16
Age: 33, clone 29
Bloodline: Deteis
Nationality: Caldari State, Kaalakiota Corporation

PHYSICAL CHARACTERISTICS
Hair: Black
Eyes: Blue
Height: 176cm
Weight: 61kg
Build: Slim

Her frame is toned and somewhat boyish, both of her arms are standard looking matte black cybernetics, although she’s hardly very imposing. Her hair is jet black, and she tends toward darker colours in clothing.

DED Threat Assessment
Moderate.
Little experience solo, often flying in a small gang or scouting.
Positive security status highly misleading.

Personality Assessment:
Asocial, often avoids people especially in large groups. She’s prone to bouts of intense concentration, focusing on the same task for extended periods of time.

In group settings, she often goes unnoticed. She doesn’t seem bothered by this, tending to observe and listen instead of directly interacting anyway.

Despite this, she’s usually friendly.

Update 2017.11.09: Changed things. I'm bad at physical description.
« Last Edit: 16 Nov 2017, 17:59 by Aradina »
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Re: [Character] Aradina Varren
« Reply #1 on: 15 Oct 2017, 21:56 »

Pretty standard format for a "DED-type assessment" thingy, so well done there.

As for the character in general, well I actually don't really have any RP experience with her. So I wouldn't say I am qualified to comment on that. However I see that she is a KK citizen...gross. :P

On a more serious note, she does seem like a good Caldari. Quiet, stoic even. Very dedicated to her work. And very good at her work, at that. Basically 10/10 would For the State again.
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Re: [Character] Aradina Varren
« Reply #2 on: 17 Oct 2017, 10:00 »

From what little I know about your character, this suits her well.
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