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[Character]Aracturus Camarus
« on: 29 Apr 2010, 10:48 »

**State Navy Retiree Database**
State Citizenship ID: 747875229830411-433970014296986
Name: Aracturus Camarus
Corporation of Birth: Ishukone
Current Employer: Ascendant Strategies Inc.
Active Duty Status: Caldari Navy -RETIRED-
Faction: Caldari
Caldari Navy Rank: Ensign
Current Corp Rank: Field Agent
Age: 32
Height: 218cm
Mass: 95.2543 kg
Weight: 933.49 Newtons
Eyes: Grn
Hair: Brown
Distinguishing features:
Goatee, generally wears a uniform reminiscent of Caldari Navy Ship Captain's Uniform.
Bloodline: Deteis
Background: Tube Child
Weapon License: -Active- Licensed to carry and operate the following personal firearms:
      Projectile:
          Handguns, Automatic or semi
          Assault Rifles, Semi Automatic only
      Plasma/Particle Accelerator:
          Handguns, Semi Automatic only
          Assault Rifles, Automatic or Semi
Restrictions: Not permitted to own, operate, or carry the following types of firearm under ANY circumstances:
    Shotguns
    Man-Portable Missile Launchers.
Command: TBS-27 "Predator" (Raven), TBS-28 "Ultimatum" (Rokh), TBC-48 "Bloodhound"(Ferox), TBC-49      "Jacob Cole"(Drake), TCC-5 "Apotheosis"(Chimera), TLC-38 "Halcyon"(Caracal), TCD-87 "The   Reliant"(Cormorant), TF-882 "FireBird"(Merlin), TBS-29 "Stalwart"(Scorpion)
Bio:
A tube born created to serve The State, He served in CalNav for eight years, reaching the rank of Ensign aboard the Destroyer The Fairborough,  leaving CalNav after its destruction at the hands of Pirates, and vowing to exterminate them from the galaxy.
Previously engaged to Marisse Velahar, the engagement has since been broken off.
Aracturus plans to go into the Caldari Navy Independent Reserve.
Personality:
Prefers commanding large ships, fleet tactical combat is where Aracturus really shines. He enjoys coffee, strawberry slushies, and blowing things up. He has a strong dislike for pirates which he vents regularly on so-called "Rats"
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Re: [Character]Aracturus Camarus
« Reply #1 on: 13 Jan 2011, 17:58 »

Update:
**State Navy Retiree Database**
State Citizenship ID: 747875229830411-433970014296986
Name: Aracturus Camarus
Corporation of Birth: Ishukone
Current Employer: United Systems Navy
Alliance: Wildly Inappropriate (WI. or WIdot)(Northern Coalition)
Active Duty Status: -RETIRED-
Faction: Caldari
Caldari Navy Rank: Ensign
Current Corp Rank: Field Agent
Age: 32
Height: 218cm
Mass: 95.2543 kg
Weight: 933.49 Newtons
Eyes: Grn
Hair: Brown
Distinguishing features:
Goatee, wears a black Caldari Uniform. Upper torso covered in tattoos from Naval service.
Bloodline: Deteis
Background: Tube Child
Weapon License: -Active- Licensed to carry and operate the following personal firearms:
      Projectile:
          Handguns, Automatic or semi
          Assault Rifles, Semi Automatic only
      Plasma/Particle Accelerator:
          Handguns, Semi Automatic only
          Assault Rifles, Automatic or Semi
Restrictions: Not permitted to own, operate, or carry the following types of firearm under ANY circumstances:
    Shotguns
    Man-Portable Missile Launchers.
Skill Proficiencies: Unarmed Combat, small arms, Missile Ballistics
Command: USNBC-61 'Firsthold', USNBC-62 'Stalwart'

Psychological Profile:
"Aracturus Camarus has a tendency to wear his emotions on his sleeve, as a sort of self-defense mechanism, to protect himself from feeling the pain of loss. While originally having a solid nerve and being of solid psychological fortitude, the loss of his fellow crewmen aboard the Fairborough has caused Aracturus to suffer from mood swings, often going from angry and intimidating to quiet and timid. Furthermore, his alarming tendency to react to any issue by consuming copious amounts of alcohol points to deep-seated psychological issues that stem from his time aboard the Fairborough. It is thus my diagnosis that Aracturus suffers from a severe case of Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder (PTSD). He exists in an extremely fragile emotional state, and caution should be used while dealing with him. However, despite his emotional state, his psychological state is solid enough. With hesitation and minor reservation I approve him to begin training as a Capsuleer."
- School of Applied Knowledge Psychologist

Medical notes:
"An exceptionaly healthy example of Caldari Genes. I declare Aracturus Camarus to MEET and EXCEED the phsyical and genetic requirements for the Capsuleer Program."

A tube born created to serve The State, He served in CalNav for eight years, reaching the rank of Ensign aboard the Destroyer The Fairborough,  leaving CalNav after its destruction at the hands of Pirates, and vowing to exterminate them from the galaxy.
Previously engaged to Marisse Velahar, the engagement has since been broken off.
Aracturus is currently romantically involved with Saira Arikaiken, CEO of Shintoko Corporation.
Personality:
Prefers commanding large ships, fleet tactical combat is where Aracturus really shines. He enjoys coffee, strawberry slushies, and blowing things up. He has a strong dislike for pirates which he vents regularly on so-called "Rats"
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Re: [Character]Aracturus Camarus
« Reply #2 on: 17 Jan 2011, 06:27 »

Some constructive things you may want to consider...

"Ensign" is the lowest officer rank, and in most militaries you either start as a rating or as an officer, depending on your education level. Most ensigns would be around late teens or earlier 20s. Did Arac climb the ranks of rating before reaching ensign? He might be quite old by this point. Of course, Caldari do things VERY differently to any RL militaries, such as being "accepted" into the Caldari Army at 12 (Under the Sea, the City). So you can easily wave dramatic license around in that regard.

Again, this is completely conjecture and nobody knows how the Caldari would react in this regard, but having tattoos is often seen as unbecoming of officers. Tattoos are individiualistic and vain, not sure if that's something the Caldari would encourage from what we know of them, as everyone has to be "in line". But I could be completely wrong, or maybe Arac acquired the tattoos when he wasn't at officer rank.

Just my two cents, feel free to completely ignore or take on board, whichever  :)
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Re: [Character]Aracturus Camarus
« Reply #3 on: 17 Jan 2011, 09:06 »

...Of course, Caldari do things VERY differently to any RL militaries, such as ...
^And maybe a rich mommy and daddy buying your rank? o_O
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Re: [Character]Aracturus Camarus
« Reply #4 on: 17 Jan 2011, 20:14 »

...Of course, Caldari do things VERY differently to any RL militaries, such as ...
^And maybe a rich mommy and daddy buying your rank? o_O

Unlikely, considering Caldari culture. Remember, it's "meritocracy", which means the most ruthless, efficient, and capable get to the top. Buying a position, so to speak, might be more common in the corporate police forces, but still, even those are very, very competitive (at least, according to the Chrons).

As for tattoos, both the character generator and some of the fiction pictures have lots of Caldari with tattoos, mostly stars and such (which likely means the same thing to them as it would to us - a patriotic theme). Considering that many military forces today aren't exactly "strict" about tattoos, it's unlikely the Caldari would deny exceptional candidates promotion for such a trivial matter.

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Re: [Character]Aracturus Camarus
« Reply #5 on: 17 Jan 2011, 21:00 »

Also, if anything I would think people might get a rank through more direct nepotism than actual rank buying. Your mom/uncle/etc. has connections and they pull strings to get you a rank, rather than paying for it outright.

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Re: [Character]Aracturus Camarus
« Reply #6 on: 18 Jan 2011, 09:22 »

iirc, in the lvl1 epic arc, there's mention of a commander being in place due to "influence", and you have to obtain some documents to show some other commander is more worthy of that particular duty.
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Re: [Character]Aracturus Camarus
« Reply #7 on: 19 Jan 2011, 13:06 »

iirc, in the lvl1 epic arc, there's mention of a commander being in place due to "influence", and you have to obtain some documents to show some other commander is more worthy of that particular duty.

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