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Author Topic: Circle of Flight  (Read 933 times)

Kiki Truzhari

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Circle of Flight
« on: 01 Dec 2011, 17:30 »
So I'm writing the backstory for Kikia out as a sort of chronicle. If anyone ants to read it, here's a link:
Circle of Flight

I would really appreciate feedback.
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Ava Starfire

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Re: Circle of Flight
« Reply #1 on: 03 Dec 2011, 12:16 »
An outstanding chronicle, Kikia, and as always, well written. I love the character; takes courage to play a character that is trans, in our sad, homophobic society.
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Logan Fyreite

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Re: Circle of Flight
« Reply #2 on: 05 Jan 2012, 11:40 »
Between this and On Top of the World my characters backstory seems about an inch deep, thanks a lot  :bash:

Great backstory, brings up some questions about my character that I haven't examined before.
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