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Garret Solus

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Provocative?
« on: 08 Sep 2017, 14:38 »
Looking for a little input on a picture specifically tailored to my IC main... Yes? No? Why? Why not? I haven't decided on an RP route yet, but I am looking at being a strong contributor to Prime Fiction. (( a bit new, and apologies if this was not the correct convo to drop in. Also, yes, I did make these ugly atrocities...))

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Image One >>>   http://imgur.com/w68MTtf
Image Two >>>   http://imgur.com/AXFZLbg
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Lasairiona

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Re: Provocative?
« Reply #1 on: 09 Sep 2017, 03:02 »
I'm not keen on either, but as an author, I'm a bit of a book cover snob :-P Out of the two, I'd be partial to the first one.
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Re: Provocative?
« Reply #2 on: 09 Sep 2017, 11:20 »
Agreed with Laisa for what it's worth but the second could hint at a jekyl and hyde situation, or a dark  inner self?
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Ché Biko

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Re: Provocative?
« Reply #3 on: 09 Sep 2017, 12:21 »
Of course I'm listening to Marilyn Manson as I read this.

I would go with #2 but with a bit more color. I'm thinking red. It needs more work anyway.
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Garret Solus

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Thanks!
« Reply #4 on: 09 Sep 2017, 13:58 »
Thank you! Appreciate the input! And as an (fledgling) author, I am usually more about the words than the pictures (and since there are not enough words for the story as of yet, that will have to wait.  ;) ) As far as being a professional digital artist or author, these things I am NOT. But they are both hobbies I hope to get better at in the future. I will work on this Cover Page while I am writing the PF. I'll continue to post the fixes here as well as a link to the story once it is finished. Again, thank you for the input! I look forward to trying to be an active member here. Been years since  I have had the time to do any RP/story stuff, so I am kind of pumped. Hope you have a great day.
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