I also agree with your statement on tech, economy and military actually. It's just that your OOC note on the IGS was really not that, for a moment I thought source really stated what you said on the IGS...
Well, Vikarion wasn't lying on the IGS. EvE:Source is a little weird on it. The Amarr, for example, are said to have the largest economy. The Caldari are said to have a strong economy, being the most efficient, the most productive, and strongest in R&D. Then you go over to the Gallente section and their economy is the best at providing consumer goods, tourism, commercial industry, and probably distribution. As for how they are doing right now, the Caldari are apparently experiencing a boom after Heth being deposed, the Gallente are not growing as fast as under Fouritain, with Roden funneling the economy into the military side, and the Republic is prospering. The Caldari are said to have the flat-out strongest military, however, and the best military tech.
To the wider point about the portrayal of the factions, I think that reading only some of the sources of lore will tend to create a different picture than the one you might have if you read them all.
Gwen, while I agree that the EvE:Source Chronicle is going for that, I also think that "our culture has so much opportunity and variety that it's hard to focus on one thing" is, as far as negative points go, pretty meh. It's like saying that grocery stores are bad because they have too many varieties of cereal.
And then you have the unending song of the hippie-hallelujah chorus in praise of the Gallente throughout practically the rest of their section, not including the mentions in other sections. Like how life in the Federation is "described as utopian". Like how personal freedom is guaranteed on all planets, and if you don't like how one is run, you can just move. Like how Gallente art and culture reaches heights so sophisticated that the philistines in the rest of the cluster are incapable of grasping some of it. There's wonderful religious harmony, with churches lined up side by side (I'd love to know how they manage this, BTW) with priests and ministers of different faiths chatting happily after services (seriously, I'm not kidding, page 72).
The big danger for the Gallente? Well, their "shining greatness" could be endangered by the malaise of low voter turn-out. Another quote: "Some believe this is an unavoidable side effect of the Federation's greatness; if everyone is happy, they don't feel the need to speak up and make changes." Oh, and vice, whatever that is. I suppose if one thinks that body modification, or experimentation with non-harmful drugs (The Federation bans harmful ones), or gambling is just horrible, then you have that.
Oh, darn. How
terrible.Of course, then they went and made gambling one of the favorite past-times of the Caldari, so if you're going on vice as a down-side, well, looks like the Federation wins again.
The poor get health care and government aid for their kids, schooling is free (apparently even college) and private schools abound, and anyone can experiment to find the best career and lifestyle. The Gallente are also the strongest cultural force in the cluster, and, oh, I almost forgot, also have the best intelligence agency and personnel in the cluster.
And that's just from EvE:Source.
But you know what? Fine. I think the above is a Mary Sue-ish country, and thus a problem. But let CCP have their little idealized Europe-in-space. The bigger frustration is that CCP won't even let the other nations in the cluster be good at the things that they are supposed to be good at.
The Amarr Empire? Supposed to be a bastion of stability, order, and tradition? How many leaders has it had in the past ten years? Four? And one was a Blood Raider, who was followed by Princess Jamyl The Cheating Nut-Queen. Oh, and whereas the Caldari could only take Caldari Prime with the help of a top Gallente on the inside, the Amarr are apparently
just that incompetent when it comes to defending their own territory, from the Minmatar, from the Gallente, or from pretty much anyone else. Or invading anyone else's - thanks, Uriam Kador. One wonders how they've lasted 2 years, much less a millennium or two.
The Republic? Well, the Republic has become the paranoid-schizophrenic step-child of the Federation. When it's not spending long periods of time doing nothing or losing territory to the Angels, it's going full-out psycho and trying to invade the Federation (and getting utterly stomped, of course, because we can't have the Federation losing anything). Hardly seems like the sort of thing that one would expect from a system that's supposed to put the wisest and most careful at the top, but hey, I guess them's the breaks. Honestly, the Republic doesn't even get to do anything cool, because apparently any time someone has the idea for a cool thing, it goes to the Federation.
The State? Well, the State's supposed to be the hard-ass on the block. The State is supposed to be militarily strong, efficient, hard-working, and smart. Sure, not always so concerned with niceties like human rights or personal liberty, but there you go. So obviously the correct thing to do is have them getting the shit beaten out of them every time they go up against anyone, from the Sansha to the Federation. Hell, they couldn't even conduct a surprise invasion without taking massive losses, threatening genocide, and needed both the Broker and the top Gallente Admiral helping them. Oh, and despite their "strong economy", be suffering from worker riots, need giant loans from the Amarr, and have half a dozen news stories every couple years talking about how bad X megacorporation is doing.
So the big problem is the portrayal, the "show me" of the story, rather than the footnotes to it. We can argue all day about who has the best back-story on EvElopedia. But when it comes to events, to news stories, etc, well, no one gets to be better than the Federation. At anything.
And that's boring.