Since writing Adreena's bio has shown so far to be a work in regress, I (for now) skip this step and ask for some feedback.
Part of the problem of writing this bio is that Adreena started as a blank slate , since I knew nothing of the universe (except fro the spaceship part ; Adreena's creation consisted of three steps "Oh, tribals ! Oh, thinkers ! Oh, tinkerers !" and that was pretty much it). The only thing I knew was that I wanted to play a normal character -normal as in "I can believe such a person would exist in such a universe".
Some details about her were decided by the roll of a d100 (she's left-handed, her blood group A+), some were laid in a short story posted somewhere in here, many more were decided/discovered during different rp moments :
She's young, both in age and at heart (the way I rp'ed her, and the way people react toward her).
She's small (the way she reacted when she met Pieter for the first time).
She simultaneously worships and is terrified by her father, she has a low self-esteem, her inner voice constantly smacktalking her (hardly noticeable in a channel, but an important part of her contributions in the "Who Am I" thread on the Eve forums).
She is a clusterfuck of contradicting emotions, rapidly switching from one opposite to another (that's the player main contribution ^^ ).
I had tons of fun roleplaying her so far (thanks to those who made such moments possible
), and her evolution/discovery has felt rather organic to me.
If you have any critics, remarks, suggestions, they would be more than welcome