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[Ember Vykos]

Name: Develon, Simca R.
Ethnicity: Intaki/Civire
Age: 24
Height: 5'8" / 173cm
Weight: 120lbs / 54kg
Build: Slim/Athletic
Eye Color: Blue
Hair Color: Black
Place of Birth: Mordu's Legion Testing Facility Station, 5ZXX-K, Pure Blind
Distinguishing Features: Scar on left side of face
Known Cybernetics: Ocular Implant(Left Eye), Pod Interface
Known Affiliations: Former member of Mordu's Legion, current political ties unknown.

[Ember Vykos]

Hmm. Pic is a bit too big and I'm not sure how to make it shrink to fit so help there would be appreciated . Also, thoughts? I tried for a simple background from an FIO perspective.

[Ken]

Pic fits my screen just fine.  As for Simca, I like it!  Believable and yet very intriguing background.

[Ember Vykos]

Thanks. \o/
I think the fit deal is because I dont have my browser full screen so guess you can just ignore that bit .

[Marcus Gord]

Looks good to me. Looking forward to seeing how you play her, being as I looked into a Mordus corp before joining PRELI and didn't find anything 

If you're going into the FDU, we might end up on the end of each others guns. Though having flown with you, flying against you is bound to be a good fight 

[Mathra Hiede]

Do Like.

However the text is hard to read, could use a better font... but thats just my opinion.
I look forward to seeing you in space!

[Lyn Farel]

Use small case for descriptions I think =)

[Ember Vykos]

Thanks for the input guys. I'm probably gonna work on it some more this weekend so I'll see what I can do to make it a bit more reader friendly.

Use small case for descriptions I think =)

I don't think I capitalized anything when I made that. The font I used only has one case.    I may see if I can find another one though.

Looks good to me. Looking forward to seeing how you play her, being as I looked into a Mordus corp before joining PRELI and didn't find anything 

If you're going into the FDU, we might end up on the end of each others guns. Though having flown with you, flying against you is bound to be a good fight 

A Mordu corp is still a possibility at some point, though I will confess I know nothing about running a corp and tbh never really wanted to, but it's still in my head so may work out at some point. As for being on the receiving end of your guns I don't think I have alot to worry about.  Kidding aside it should be good fun, and might lead to some fun IC interactions if/when I ever make my way into The Skyhook.

[Ember Vykos]

Updated with a different font. Let me know if that helped make it easier to read.

[Mathra Hiede]

Updated with a different font. Let me know if that helped make it easier to read.

Much easier to read - but there is still the blurring of where the header starts and the info begins.

So, perhaps going NAME: Simca Develon with sized fonts might help?

[Lyn Farel]

Actually the font you use is nice for short bits of sentences, words, or titles (or just caldari tag on their ships :p). So yes, I would definitly use a more conventionnal font for paragraphs.

There is also another factor to take in account : bigger is your text, lower is the "quality" in terms of page design. Smaller is your text, and paragraphs that can breath (with sometimes more than 2 or 3 times blank than text), points to upmarket standards. It might be nice to move a little the text out of the border (putting it directly in contact with the border is something not to do usually).

Keep the difference of colors between your points and the descriptions, though. It is a good way to make the text less monotonous.

Hope it helps.