That's awesome!
I mostly really like what has been done, especially to depict the Elders and get more info on them. They appear now a lot more humane and flawed as anyone. The precise explanation of how things happened in the formation of the Mandate and the secret resistance network worked well to my eyes. Funny though, how it participates to make the Ammatar even more clueless and manipulated by all sides (lol, even Sundara says "don't defend them, they are not worth it"). Well, Sundara is probably right to that point, those Ammatars are really useless up to a point where I wonder if they are not just there as plot tool supporting the development of the main factions more than anything else.
I still however noted some weird things, and something I am very, very unhappy about:
Keitan Yun comes with an ultimatum to CONCORD HQ, they jump a large portion of the elder fleet as a show of force, then withdraw... And then come back days later for the real attack ? What the hell is CONCORD thinking ? You breach Yulai security once and they do nothing to prevent it to happen again after ?
And moreso, are even surprised when they get blown up into oblivion ?
Anyway, that doesn't make any sense to me.
If the system is cynojammed (as it should be), then you have to shut down stuff manually with sub capital fleets. CONCORD is known for its near instant force projection capability more than its fleet numbers.That shouldn't be possible. The only conclusion I can see is utter incompetence.
Once again, i'm appalled how CONCORD is depicted. Besides a few badasses like that admiral capsuleer or Korachi, all of CONCORD seem to be made of cosmic jokes.