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Author Topic: [Character] DEFUNCT  (Read 2063 times)

Nissui

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[Character] DEFUNCT
« on: 22 Oct 2013, 13:40 »
*snip*

This character has been sold.
« Last Edit: 26 Nov 2016, 21:20 by Nis »
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Nissui

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Re: [Character] Nisme Suidis
« Reply #1 on: 22 Oct 2013, 13:49 »
As short as it is, this took me 7+ days to throw together. It was an exercise in frustration trying to get it right, so I'm hoping to get some feedback on how I can develop this more in line with PF and player content.

There are obviously details left out to maintain the element of the unknown, and I worry that this is too generic a profile without those details.

So if you have a critique, please do present it. Thank you.
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Kopenhagen

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Re: [Character] Nisme Suidis
« Reply #2 on: 22 Oct 2013, 16:05 »
I know little about Matar rituals, but seems there is quite a bit of detail there. Which is nice.

I take it the combat you speak about was before becoming a capsuleer? It might be fun to actually play some of that.

Otherwise, it looks like a good start. And remember, sometimes the most mundane characters become the most interesting.


What I enjoy doing is filling in Jude's backstory as I play him. Since I then have a better understanding of him, it makes it easier to see where he might have come from.

But that is just me.

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A man who does not test his shaving cream for poison each morning has lost the will to live.

Nissui

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Re: [Character] Nisme Suidis
« Reply #3 on: 23 Oct 2013, 19:19 »
Quote from: Kopenhagen on 22 Oct 2013, 16:05
What I enjoy doing is filling in Jude's backstory as I play him. Since I then have a better understanding of him, it makes it easier to see where he might have come from.

Thanks for making this point, it was kind of what I was hoping for. I have trouble finding the right moment to chime in, so I usually just observe. I've been thinking of using ~activities-in-space~ as a springboard for character building, so I will try it at my next opportunity.

o7
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Nissui

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« Reply #4 on: 27 Nov 2013, 02:37 »
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« Last Edit: 22 Apr 2015, 01:04 by Nissui »
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Nissui

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« Reply #5 on: 27 Apr 2014, 19:39 »
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« Last Edit: 22 Apr 2015, 01:05 by Nissui »
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Nissui

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Re: [Character] Nisme Suidis
« Reply #6 on: 22 Apr 2015, 01:15 »
Well it's been about a year, ought to tidy this up I s'pose.

EDIT: Cleaned things up, made some edits. Like it a little better now.
« Last Edit: 12 Jul 2015, 17:17 by Nissui »
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Tabor Murn

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Re: [Character] Nisme Suidis
« Reply #7 on: 22 Apr 2015, 06:59 »
Looks good. I especially like the attention to the clan background. Can't wait for more RPs!
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Re: [Character] Nisme Suidis
« Reply #8 on: 22 Apr 2015, 12:29 »
Vherocool ♥
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