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a lone miner was detained and executed on 29.11YC105 for "suspicious curiosity" after asking passing Imperial Fleet ships "where they were going with all those guns".

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Re: Transition
« Reply #15 on: 18 Apr 2013, 15:07 »
*pats Wisp*  I like this one, her posture, her accent, her cheerfulness and her casual use of Angel jargon that Reina doesn't get.  Shame she's probably gonna die messily.
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Aria Jenneth

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Re: Transition
« Reply #16 on: 18 Apr 2013, 16:08 »
Part 5 up.
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« Reply #17 on: 18 Apr 2013, 17:42 »
Up and properly edited. Stupid formatting not carrying over from Word.
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Aria Jenneth

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Re: Transition
« Reply #18 on: 18 Apr 2013, 20:11 »
Sixth and final chapter up.
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Natalcya Katla

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« Reply #19 on: 18 Apr 2013, 20:42 »
That is lovely. I especially like the poem.

If I am right in guessing that this means Aria's days as a capsuleer are over, though, that makes me sad. The wistful kind of sad.
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Re: Transition
« Reply #20 on: 19 Apr 2013, 08:16 »
I obviously never interacted with Aria much for the majority of her piloting career, but that still rung bittersweet.

Thanks for posting the story. I enjoyed it.
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Re: Transition
« Reply #21 on: 19 Apr 2013, 08:42 »
 :cry:
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Arnulf Ogunkoya

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Re: Transition
« Reply #22 on: 19 Apr 2013, 09:35 »
Well this makes the ship name even more appropriate.

I'm saving up for a Marauder (a Vargur) & when I get her she's going to be the Aria of the Genocides. Good story. Sort of felt sorry for the Angel, until she started ranting.
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Re: Transition
« Reply #23 on: 19 Apr 2013, 13:10 »
Quote from: Arnulf Ogunkoya on 19 Apr 2013, 09:35
Sort of felt sorry for the Angel, until she started ranting.

To be fair, she's got quite a bit to rant about. All the pirate factions do, where capsuleers are concerned.
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Re: Transition
« Reply #24 on: 19 Apr 2013, 13:53 »
That was an amazing story well done
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