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Title: Hakari's blog
Post by: Hakari on 29 Jun 2016, 08:35

The story of a Young women trying to be her own person.

http://harkari.blogspot.co.uk/

advice is very welcome never wrote like this before.

Title: Re: Hakari's blog
Post by: Arnulf Ogunkoya on 29 Jun 2016, 12:57

Looks good.

Judging from your choice of character illustration I'm guessing you'r seeing yourself as a Grayson to the Empire's Manticorians.

Just don't be mistaking either the Republic or the Gallente for the Peeps. Oh, and have a look for the Audub0n Ballroom seeing as you're a fan of Honor & her world.

Title: Re: Hakari's blog
Post by: Hakari on 29 Jun 2016, 20:02

Not quite, and well we all know the peeps was EM and U'K

Title: Re: Hakari's blog
Post by: LifeNTimes on 30 Jun 2016, 14:50

I like this!  I really like the way that you open up the inner life of the character as she makes her way through capsuleer life.  Keep it up!  I'd love to read more.