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DUST 514 RP Discussion and Resources => DUST 514 Character Development => Topic started by: Denak Kalamari on 18 Jun 2013, 16:20
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(Quite a big work in progress, I plan on adding more details to this later.)
Name: Denak Kalamari (Originally Tanmay Pravir)
Age: 33
Height: 6'3"
Weight: 187 lbs.
Hairstyle: Black, shaved mohawk
Eyecolor: Brown
Place-Of-Birth: Intaki V
Race: Intaki
Occupation: Capsuleer, manufacturer and general industry professional, former clone soldier
Faith System: Pantheism
Languages: Intaki and Gallentean
Overview:
Being a clone soldier for several years, Denak prefers practical and simple outfits. In his holo-projection he is seen wearing a black vest, gray t-shirt, black pants and boots, with not much exception when encountering him face-to-face. On his right cheek he has a noticeable scar due to an explosion. Denak usually speaks little or when necessary, and tries his best not to draw too much attention to himself.
Blog found here. (http://clonesoldier.blogspot.com/) Criticism still welcome.
Also Federal Intelligence Office interrogation report (https://docs.google.com/document/d/10zMeJCYfgvHn8QniNmagxiux_w5AmGqnBreA2EnKLFY/edit?usp=sharing) made about him at the time of his capture.
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Not a bad start. I'm interested to see how your character develops.
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I already know "a bit" about Denak IC by watching and talking to him. I try not to read these too closely so I don't meta, but, yay!
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A small update, wrote a new diary entry and added a few new segments onto the profile to describe Denak a little more detailed.
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I'll make sure to keep up with his diaries!
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Thanks Galm, I'll be looking forward to your profile too(if you ever make one).
Also, more entries have been written, be sure to check them out!