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EVE-Online RP Discussion and Resources => EVE Character Development => Topic started by: Nissui on 22 Oct 2013, 13:40
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This character has been sold.
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As short as it is, this took me 7+ days to throw together. It was an exercise in frustration trying to get it right, so I'm hoping to get some feedback on how I can develop this more in line with PF and player content.
There are obviously details left out to maintain the element of the unknown, and I worry that this is too generic a profile without those details.
So if you have a critique, please do present it. Thank you.
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I know little about Matar rituals, but seems there is quite a bit of detail there. Which is nice.
I take it the combat you speak about was before becoming a capsuleer? It might be fun to actually play some of that.
Otherwise, it looks like a good start. And remember, sometimes the most mundane characters become the most interesting.
What I enjoy doing is filling in Jude's backstory as I play him. Since I then have a better understanding of him, it makes it easier to see where he might have come from.
But that is just me.
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What I enjoy doing is filling in Jude's backstory as I play him. Since I then have a better understanding of him, it makes it easier to see where he might have come from.
Thanks for making this point, it was kind of what I was hoping for. I have trouble finding the right moment to chime in, so I usually just observe. I've been thinking of using ~activities-in-space~ as a springboard for character building, so I will try it at my next opportunity.
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Well it's been about a year, ought to tidy this up I s'pose.
EDIT: Cleaned things up, made some edits. Like it a little better now.
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Looks good. I especially like the attention to the clan background. Can't wait for more RPs!
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Vherocool ♥