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EVE-Online RP Discussion and Resources => EVE Fiction + Fiction discussion => Topic started by: kyon-ko on 18 Aug 2013, 17:55

Title: Alone in peace
Post by: kyon-ko on 18 Aug 2013, 17:55
Ok... I fucked up my first ever post and attempt at fiction... So im gonna do something short. Please tell me and suggestions and advice on how to write fiction!

I walked towards the main viewing window from the now empty bridge, dragging a fold able chair behind me. Hours ago the bridge was bustling with activities as officers went along their business, maintaining functionality of the CNR Murder. I have given the officers a break to have the bridge all to myself. The Murder is on autopilot and the hundreds of screens in the bridge slowly faded to darkness as I told her I wanted to see Uitra III, my home planet. I set the chair down and collapsed, mere feets away from the cold window as the bridge was slowly illuminated with a blue hue by the planet. The ship purred as I closed my eyes slowly, her and I basking in the light from the stars and my home. Everyone of them, shining, just for me.