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[Story] Concussion

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Silver Night:
Find it here: http://silvernight-fiction.blogspot.com/2010/07/concussion.html

Co-Authored with Ciarente of Ciarente's Fiction and Personal Files, Ciarente Roth

Hope you enjoy it.  :D

Ghost Hunter:

--- Quote ---She tried to turn enough to see through the cockpit door and lost his next words to a stab of pain. Spirits fuck my ancestors.
--- End quote ---

Typo?


Otherwise, interesting read. It feels disjointed, although I think that's the design intention.

Silver Night:
She turns, Silver say something but she misses it because of the pain. The spirits fuck my ancestors is her thought (re: the pain).

The disjointedness is intentional, yeah.

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