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Title: On Top of the World
Post by: Ava Starfire on 03 Dec 2011, 12:18
As Kikia decided to share her origin story, here is Ava's... yes, its long. Any feedback would be appreciated. There are some early PF errors, that I made before I had a complete grasp of  the EVE timeline.

http://teraamatar.userboard.net/t22-on-top-of-the-world (http://teraamatar.userboard.net/t22-on-top-of-the-world)

Thanks, and please let me know what you think!

Ava
Title: Re: On Top of the World
Post by: Logan Fyreite on 05 Jan 2012, 11:42
Between this and Circle of Flight it makes my backstory seem about an inch deep, thanks!  :bash:

Yeah so this is basically the same comment I left in the thread for Circle as well, but it's true. Lots of thought put into the backstory. Is their PF that lends to Siebiestor being tribal roamers like this? Was wondering where you drew your inspiration from. Also any insight into the language you used for the prayer would be great.

 :bear: